the downhill

Writing

Goal : add detail to support my ideas

Why i'm writing : Entertain

Name of writing : The Downhill

This is a part of my writing when i added detail : Loic soared through the whoops and wiped over the table top.  

Woops mean : rollers that mountainbike riders skim

Whips : is when mountain bike riders back end kicks out to the side   

csi

when you are reading a book and you think what it looks like in your mind.

(Example)

A huge explosion blew up the shed

 

  In my mind Here is a link to CSI Literacy            visualizing

This is all about a pepeha can you please give me some feedback on the quality of this video